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A Poem Dedicated to Naver; Inspired by "The History of Naver"
Nonskiller
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I created a Poem Dedicated to this Post > It's
not the best, I just how there's a Music Composer who can fix my Poem and turn
it into a song... or at least turn my Poem into Lyrics.
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Poem Inspired by "The History of Naver in
UWO"
Poem created by Captain.Hook, the new Ruler of
Venice.
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Lateness of an era I did not know, an history
that was untold.
His name shook the whole world in a single night.
From the distant starlit sky, Venice went beyond
the threshold.
His name was loathed by the French with no little
delight.
But to why, they disliked him.. they had a
reason.
But.. I care for him.
---CHORUS----
Though what he believed, I did disagree,
for most of what he spoke and jest, was foreseen
unwise.
What he believed, his ambitions, ideals, were to me foolish and beyond rational
degree.
But there was a goodness in him, he was brave,
and had great size.
Though I do not like his ideals, I admire him on
what he believed.
A man who would pursue and make transcend what we
could not improvise!
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He was a man boycotted by the world.
I heard stories from my friends from France,
and I asked them who this man was, only to know
he was a cruel man.
Yet, I was curious, I wished to learn of his
story, of who he was.
So I ventured forth to the land of Venice for the
truth.
---CHORUS----
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When I finally reached Venice, there I saw the
greatest man.
So I went about, and introduced myself.
A man who built his empire from the dirt in the
flash of night.
So I asked him what's going on, why he goes out
to do that he does.
I asked why he chose his way alone where everyone
disapproves of him.
And so he answered.
Comments
---------NAVER----------
My name is the Emperor Naver.
I was once part of a company in France.
I brought great strength and ambition,
so I can help build the foundation of commerce in
France.
However, a certain man I disagreed with, did not
see my ideals.
So they left and abandoned alone in my company
house in France...
They did not believe me, when I said I wished to
bring a great rise in our future.
So I defected France and became a Venetian, alone
with nobody but myself.
But even though the sun did set and the darkness
drew near, I did not give in.
I only fought for what was right and became
stronger.
I truly did believe, that the future of our
people, was to be in France, but it was always Venice.
And in order to bring rise to trade, we needed a
stronger army, to fight off the traders and win their treasures.
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And so it was that I learned,
he was a man who wished for attention,
his desire for respect was yearned!
And of course I believed what he mentioned.
He felt he was mistreated, betrayed by all that
he contributed.
He has done nothing wrong, and so he continues to
do as he pleases.
---CHORUS----
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This is a man I like the most.
For this man has courage to patronize.
To stand against a crowd on his own to boast.
He had a kind of strong will, a strong mind, a
man to truly recognize.
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I believe this man was not wrong of his past.
He's just doing the extreme, which makes everyone
despise him.
He does things for what he believes, he wishes to
belong, but nobody would allow him to last.
He is all alone in his world, a world in which he
controlled.
---CHORUS----
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And even though there is so much hate,
he truly was a brave and ambitious man.
He should be respected and adored, for he spent
a lot,
for the people of Venice, yet his voice would not
be heard.
---CHORUS----
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